"I thought that the shot of the Avril in the bathroom when

Charles was in there with his back to her was one of the best

shots I’ve seen in a long time. It was creepy as hell and laid

the perfect foundations for his advance towards her. That

genuinely made me jump and that doesn’t happen very often, so

thank you!

 

It’s written extremely well. The reference to the ‘fresh

start’ and the subsequent unpacking of boxes, including photos

and plectrums which reminded Avril of what she was trying to

get over, was really well executed. With or without the

appearance of Charles, she was a lady clearly haunted.

 

Sarah Misch’s acting was superb. For me, the stand-out moment

was that beautiful smile at the simple pleasure of hanging up

the ceiling decoration. It represented so much hope that the

fresh start might actually turn out okay. Excellent.

 

This was a gem of a short - massive well done to all involved.

Well written, well acted and well presented."

- 13Horror.com Film and Screenplay Contest